The scholarly publication “Self-Efficacy
Beliefs and Motivation in Writing Development” by Frank Pajares and Gio
Valiante explores the relationship between a writer’s self-confidence, or
rather “self-efficacy” and his or her motivation and performance in school. The
authors covered an extensive amount of information, but focused on the major
ways that self-efficacy is gained (and broken), the dominate ways of measuring
self-efficacy, the various ways in which self-efficacy positively and
negatively affects motivation and performance, and the different ways that
gender impacts self-efficacy. One of the most striking parts of the paper, to
me, was where self-efficacy stems from. The most influential source is previous
performance, but “social persuasions” also play a major role. An individual’s self-efficacy
is said to be directly linked to his academic performance (Pajares and Valiante
160). In transforming this paper I think it is appropriate to incorporate
enhancing self-efficacy in each of the two genres.
For the transformation to an older
audience, I am going to prepare a magazine article entitled “6 Ways to Improve
Your Self-Confidence” that would perhaps belong in the magazine “Health.” However,
the article focused on the impact that self-confidence can have on one’s
performance, such as how one’s level of self-efficacy is related to the
duration of efforts that individual will put into a project, more so than how
to improve one’s self confidence. For this reason, I think a somewhat along the
lines of “6 Ways that Improving Your Self-Confidence Will Improve Your Life”
may be more fitting—though I am not entirely sure. While I recognize that the
latter title is a bit wordy, I’m more concerned with which will work better
with the paper that I am transforming. I plan on using one tip from a few of
the major topics the paper discusses such as “how is self-efficacy formed,” “how
do you assess self-efficacy,” “how are self-efficacy and achievement goal
orientations related,” and so on. To add to the “magazine” style format, I may
try to tie in my first potential article title (if I do decide to go with the
second) as an add-on to my article, perhaps titles “Plus 3 Ways to Improve Your
Self-Confidence.”
To transform this to a younger
audience, I initially considered the idea of composing some sort of inspiring “self-help”
book that was appropriate for a younger audience. And then I remembered, no
book. Well, maybe not no book, but it’s
probably better as a back up option. While I was home for the weekend, I took
some time to look around and see if I could get inspired by anything. I found
some old mad-libs books, and decided that was a pretty cool genre to try to
manipulate. Part of the article I read mentioned that self-efficacy can arise
from a number of sources: primarily from prior experiences, but also from “social
persuasions.” Thus, I thought it was only appropriate to transform this into a
genre where social persuasions can occur. The activity book consists of a
series of pages, each with its own story, with blank lines to fill in words to
personalize the activity—underneath each blank the book specifies the type of
word needed (i.e. adjective, verb, etc.). I would tailor the pages to promote
self-confidence amongst friends, so perhaps instead of a blank needing an
adjective to complete the sentence, I would specify that it needed to be a
positive adjective. I also think it could be beneficial to include some pages
that are intended for an individual to complete on his own, and others that are
meant for friends to complete about other.
Hi.Samantha
ReplyDeleteMagazine article for older people is good idea and I can see you are having a hard time choosing a title for it. I think the second one will work fun. One major function of the title of a magazine article is to catch readers’ interest, so it needs to directly points out the benefits of improving self-confidence, telling audience why they should care to read. Also, I am kind of curious about the details of this article. How exactly are you gonna apply the ideas introduced in the scholarly journal in it? What are some unique conventions about the article you are trying to create? How will modify the tone and diction of the original text to make it suitable for the new situation? What is the structure of the new genre? Will it be a long essay simply translating Frank Pajares and Gio Valiante’s ideas or a list of bullets points summarizing the ideas, with a short paragraph of explanation for each of them?
Hi Samantha,
ReplyDeleteYou are very good at capturing older people's interest, and you are also very good at design titles for an essay to make it like a typical essay in magazine. You must have brainstormed a lot about what a magazine essay should look like because you write down your thinking process in your PB3A, including what decisions you make and reasons behind it, what you are more concerned with, and what you want to try in WP3.
For younger audience, you write down many struggles when you brainstorm. Specifically, you describe the changes you make when you decide what to write and how to write. I think it would be better to consider how these concepts make sense to younger audience, what specific age group you focus on, and what kind of "moves" you will employ to meet the need of audience. Good luck!
Kunianski,
ReplyDeleteI like how, early on, you’re telling me what sticks out to you—“One of the most striking parts of the paper, to me, was where self-efficacy stems from”—because this provides insights into what (still in-process) decisions you’re thinking through.
My initial impression to your “older genre” proposal was that you might be forcing the instructional/how-to piece and only focusing on confidence for confidence’s sake (and not how it pertains to writing/learning/academic performance or the, as you mentioned, “ “social persuasions”). However, based on this line it sounds like you ARE considering the connection with the Pajare piece: “how is self-efficacy formed,” “how do you assess self-efficacy,” “how are self-efficacy and achievement goal orientations related.” Some additional questions you could/should consider to contextualize this piece are: who is the writer, and what are their goals? Whose the reader/readership? What specific pubilication, and why? Whatever choices you wind up making, please be sure to base them OFF OF the original scholarly piece.
Onto your other proposal… this suggests to me that you’re thought process is absolutely heading in the right direction: “Part of the article I read mentioned that self-efficacy can arise from a number of sources: primarily from prior experiences, but also from “social persuasions.” Thus, I thought it was only appropriate to transform this into a genre where social persuasions can occur.” Great. You’re thinking about the article FIRST and THEN your transformed genres. I think you’ll need to focus on tieing the purposes of the Mad Libs piece to Pajares’s purposes, though, otherwise the connection might not be clear. As you mentioned, “social persuasions’ could help you do that.
Z
Sammy The Sprinkler,
ReplyDeleteI think your magazine article idea is super sweet. I think it would be easier to read if you just stick to a "6 Ways to _______" because then you can use sub-headings for each particular "self-confidence" tip. Is that how you're planning to organize the article? Personally, when I read magazine articles, I find them more intriguing and eye-catching if it's separated into little sub-headings. This is because I can see the general idea of the article, rather than seeing a clump of words and thinking "WHOA that's a lot of words I don't have time for that!"
Your younger audience genre sounds SUPER cool. I have no idea what a mad-lib book is (it must be an American thing), but from what you're describing it sounds like a great, creative idea. I think it would be really easy to incorporate the academic article into this particular genre with the right language and style. Children love to be creative, so an interactive "fill-in-the-blank" type book is perfect. I think it would be more suited to children if the book is really colorful and has a lot of pictures that are somewhat related to the text. Can't wait to see what you do with these ideas!
Jaimee
Hey Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI am doing my WP3 on the same article as you and reading through your game plan was really interesting for me. My initial thought was also to do a self-help book/pamphlet. I really thought that I could make an interesting pamphlet dealing with self-efficacy but I see how there might be a more effective way to get that same "self-help" idea across. We have so many different mediums for sharing information and as Zack mentioned in his comments on my PB I could use that same idea through another medium to make my transformation more interesting and engaging. I really like your mad-libs idea because it is nostalgic and makes me think about all of the times spent laughing hysterically at the results of my mad-libs stories. If you could figure out a cool way to make that work I would definitely be down to check it out. I think it could be awesome!